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Writer’s Tip – Deep POV

Deep POV is popular today, especially in young adult and suspense books. 

It helps the reader live the story right along with the character. 

I enjoy writing in Deep POV, but it is not a requirement for all manuscripts. Here are a few tips for writing in Deep POV in case you’d like to give it a try.

  • Deep POV is not a long string of internal monologue but it is always immediate and keeps the story anchored in the now.
  • It eliminates most problems with show vs. tell.
  • It polishes the voice of the character because you write your narrative as the character would think and feel it.

TIPS

  • Do not say he thought, felt, wondered, speculated, decided, etc. because the reader is already in the POVC head.
  • Use if and if only statements.

Example: If only she hadn’t locked her keys in the car.

  • When a statement won’t work use a question.

Example: Had she locked her keys in the car again?

  • Do not name a feeling
  • Use actions, behaviors, and thoughts to indicate the feeling
  • Stay away from he saw/she saw/he heard/she heard.  Simply state what the character sees, hears, etc.

Example:  He heard a door creek.

A door creaked down the hall.

  • Remain in the now. Watch for MRU violations.

Action and then reaction.

She turned on the lights when she went inside.

She went inside and turned on the lights. This is better.

  • You can use as or when if simultaneous action/reaction.

I hope these tips are helpful. If you’re interested in learning more about Deep POV, I recommend Rivet Your Readers with Deep Point of View, by Jill Elizabeth Nelson.

Do you have any POV tips to share? Comment below and you may win a book at the end of the month.

Sharon Rene

Sharon Rene is a Christian multi-published writer who never went to the prom or became a cheerleader but learned to lean on Jesus in the lonely times. Her children’s book, A Mixed Bag of God’s Grace, was released May 18, 2018, by TouchPoint Press. The first book in her YA series, Hesitant Heroes, was realeased by Anaiah Press in September 2021. The sequel, Relentless Rebels, and the prequel, Defying Destiny have now been published. The Divine Destiny Chronicles is available on Amazon or Anaiah Press.
Sharon would love for you to connect with her on her website www.sharonreneauthor.com to learn more about her Divine Destiny Young Adult series and through her newsletter Your Dream – Your Destiny.

Links:
Purchase Link for A Mixed Bag of God’s Grace
https://www.amazon.com/Mixed-Bag-Gods-Grace/dp/1946920436/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1527540028&sr=1-1&keywords=a+mixed+bag+of+god%27s+grace

www.sharonreneauthor.com

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